as opposed to

原句:
"With regards to tennis, the figure for boys who played that sport was 50 as opposed to just under 40 for girls"

"In terms of cars, people in the UK spent about ￡450,000 on this as opposed to the French at ￡400,000."


可以寫成這樣嗎?
=>"With regards to tennis, the figure for boys who played that sport was 50 as opposed to the girls at 40.

=>"In terms of cars, people spent about ￡450,000 on this as opposed to at ￡400,000 in France  ."



另外網路上看到有人寫
"Alex goes to Japan on business as opposed to a holiday."
如果今天要隊比的是國家,可以寫成這樣嗎?
"Alex goes to Japan on business as opposed to Thailand."